Friday, May 4, 2012
In this blog I'm going to talking about how CAFO and the article "The End of overheating" by David A. Kessler are alike. In the CAFO it talks about how animals get slaughtered and get processed and how they get to us while we eat it. The CAFO where animals get slaughtered and what types of medicines and steriods they put in the animals they get delivered to us and we the people eat it. From the article " The End of overheating" by David A. Kessler he talks about us the people being targets and we eat the food. Not only CAFO provides us with meat that is contimanted, Kessler tells us that sugar, fat,salt are a big problem as well. Over the years people all of a sudden are gaining a lot of amount of weight even children over the years are gaining weight thanks to the sugar, fat and salt.Scientist who did reasearch on this believe that " fat provokes so many different sensations in the mouth, we can't always tell which food contains the most fat or why perfer one sugar-far mixture to another" (Drewnowski 13). A lot of fat that we eat more likely we can't taste the sugar or salt thanks to the fat we eat, this tell us that the fat changes are taste which is a big problem. Nothing can stop this because we eat or drink a lot sugar, fat and salt.
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ReplyDeleteHey Maria, my name is Emmanuel. I’m a student in Professor Cooper’s ENG 101 class. Foremost I’d like to comment that your blog assignment is one that sparks interest. The size of your paragraph seems legitimate enough to reflect the ideas you want to convey. You provided the necessary and obvious information such as the title of the article, its author, and proper quotations. However, although you described its purpose, you may want to abbreviate CAFO for first time readers on this. Also, the sentence where you introduce what CAFO does, it is reiterated in the following sentence. This is unnecessary. You can still expand effectively without it. There was a slight grammar problem that might be hard for readers to understand such as “…gaining a lot of amount of weight even children over the years are gaining weight thanks to the sugar, fat and salt.” Simply placing a period after “amount of weight” should suffice in not making it sound like a run-on sentence. But just saying “thanks to the sugar…”adds a playful tone on a not so playful subject matter. You exercised your conversational voice here. Other than that you clearly understood the assignment.